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There once was a water park where there were kids playing in the water. They were splashing and you could see a water slide in the back where there were kids going down the slide. It was a very sunny day, enough to get sunburn. There were lanes for people to swim in; there were fast lanes and slow lanes. In the back people were eating food with their family’s. They looked happy. Some of their friends were there so then they got to be with their family and friends. It started to get late and everyone left.
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