Sleepwalking
It was a hilarious day.My friends came over and they had a sleepover. my friends and l we were all a sleep and l started to walk. l did not know my friend was awake. l walked in the living room and my dad was talking to me when l was sleepwalking. I went in my friends bed when he was awake it was a Saturday when it was the morning me and my friends had pancakes with golden syrup on it we had more food after he had pancakes we had a milo to with lots of chocolate. It was super delicious we asked my dad if they could come again and he said no so l stayed at there house.
When we got there it was late so we went to sleep. In the middle of the night l started sleepwalking. l was sleep talking too. l went to the couch and my friends was still awake so they let me sleep there because they did not want to wake me up. When l woke up l grabbed my blankets and l threw them off me. We woke up and my friends where snatching stuff off each other. l asked them what they were doing because they woke me up. We were supposed to be quite.
So they started teasing me so l decided never to stay at their house they were laughing.
I like how you have started to experiment with paragraphs Jesse. I think sleep walking is very funny as well. I remember my friend Lucy used to sleep talk at our sleepovers when I was your age and she used to be very embarrassed in the morning. Next time see if you can remember to put a capital letter at the beginning of a sentence.
ReplyDeleteIs This true.It is very funny.well done
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DeleteKia Ora Jesse, its me Miguel from your school. I really like what you wrote, you gave so many me ideas maybe in the future I will use some of your ideas.
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