Chrismas Snow

Hello readers today we started writing a story about christmas because it was snowing in Canada the pcture with a house with snow on it trees and a dark sky, chrismas trees. This is what I done please leave a comment on my blog on what I could do better next time.

A pitch black sky with trees a light so bright shining through the tree snow falling on the floor. The dark tree streches over to the other side of the house with snow already covering the branches. The snow covering the ground high enough you could'nt even in walk in it. Santa Clause came through the top of the house and then put the chrismas presents down for all of the little kids.

Santa Clause fell through the roof because he is fat. He has a big white beard, with a red suit with nine reindeers so he can fly around town and drop off more presents to the rest of the kids. He has white hair. Santa is dropping off all of the presents to all of the kids so they are happy and the kids get what they wished for and santa's little helpers are waiting at the north pole for santa to come back.

Santa fell through the roof and now he is stuck, the parents walk into the house and the start whacking with a broom becase they think he is a entroudor. He cant get out because his sac is stuck in the hole with him which means the kids won't be getting presents. Santa waited ages and there was still no help he was getting cold and the wind was blowing into his face he had snow on his face because it was falling out of the air.

After four hours some came to save Santa he was saved but he still needed to deliver all of the presents santa finished the house he was already at and then he hopped on his sled with his reindeers. They flew him to the next house he was running out of time so he got Miss Clause to help. They were both getting around to the houses they were just about finished but there was still one more house they got there and then they both went back to the north pole and Christmas was saved.