14/6/2017

On Friday Messi is going to new york to play a soccer game with his friends to play he is in the. Best team it is Argentina he is a smart football player and he is going on a bullet train there are going to be 10000 people at the game.Messi is 21 years old and he is a boy and he is the best soccer player in his team Messi is really big and he is really fast runner and he plays for Argentina and his friends are Ronaldo and other people he is really good at every sports.

Mrs N said great description start. Fix a few full stops and then on to WHERE (the stadium ) and WHAT happens in the game.

Ronaldo and Messi are going on a train to new york to play a game of soccer with 14 people but l do not no their names they are going to win a game and they are going to a stadium at new york

19/6/2017

And Ronaldo and Messi  arrived at the new york stadium they were nervously good adverb:)  in Argentina.  They are going to win messi is the best player in his team and the game was almost started it was 10 minutes until it started now it was time to start the game started messi almost scored and the game was almost done the game was 21 minutes to go.  but Ronaldo and Messi were passing quickly and Messi scored because the goalie was hopeless  hehe I like this bit about and

Missed. The ball was it was going super fast like flash nearly a simile here. The ball was flying through the air as fast as a …

How do we know the game ended? Did the referee blow the whistle loudly for full time or ... the game ended and Messi Ronaldo and his friends went back to china.the whistle was loud  Tell the reader how they felt about the game. When Messi got back from china Messi was really happy because he scored a goal by passing to Ronaldo he was happy when he got home he plays clash of clans he was winning he destroyed four towers