I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Tuesday, August 25, 2020
WW1
Hello readers for the last couple of weeks we have been working on world war one slides and today we had to do a DLO about some questions we had to talk about them I added a photo to make it look better and it looked better because I made it look good and this is what I made please leave a comment on my blog on what I could do better.
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Hi Jesse I really like your blog post because of the background of you google drawing. The only thing is that your pictures are not compatible or related to the women in world war 1. Your picture are guys that are fighting at war, its's not related to the topic. Pls reply and fix it.
ReplyDeleteHi Jesse I really like the work you have done it look's really good. Maybe next time make the text bigger and Maybe put it on to two slides so it would better to read.
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