Hello readers for the last couple of weeks we have been in English with Miss Birtch we were doing a do now I like this class because l like writing. This weeks do now was why Rugby is the most definitive sport in Aotearoa New Zealand. My opinion on this topic is that I would agree because I like playing sport like rugby.When you come to New Zealand the only thing that you can think about is rugby you just want to go for a run with your friend or even play rugby.I agree on this topic because if people didn't play sport then nobody would do any exercise .Rugby defines New Zealand because some of the best players used to play for our country. This is what I wrote please leave a comment on my blog on what I could do better next time.
I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Thursday, May 27, 2021
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Hello Jesse I like your writing I cant see anything really that you could do better. The one thing you could mabye do better is making the statement longer.
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