Bouncing, Passing, Shoot
Dribbling, Running, Whistle Blows,
Game over we won.
I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
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Hi Jesse
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your Haiku about basketball. You used some really descriptive words. I think your middle line may be one syllable too long. Great work on this new type of poetry.
- Miss Birtch