I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Monday, February 10, 2020
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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ReplyDeletehello my name is Angus
ReplyDeleteI am in your class this sis a very good blog post I like so much I like the photo of the space pirate mark watney you should next time add paragraphs
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Kia ora Jesse!
ReplyDeleteNice job on this blog, you wrote a lot about the movie! I think Angus has a good point, you could indicate your paragraphs better by spacing them out, but I can see where you have broken up your ideas.
I think you should work with a buddy for some editing when you are fast finished, or re-read yourself. There are just a few tiny spelling errors that if you caught them, would really improve the overall quality of your blog work.
- Miss Birtch